About Sarah Dawson

For nearly a decade, I have worked with both corporate and independent authors to perfect their writing prior to its publication. As a freelancer, the services I offer include proofreading, copyediting (light, medium, and heavy), substantive editing, rewriting, and writing. Whatever the type of service I provide, I consider myself a liaison between author and reader; my job is to convey the author’s message to the reader in the clearest, most pleasing way possible. Among my particular areas of expertise are educational materials and child and young adult literature. My background as an educator and a school librarian gives me unique insight into how to make such writing exceptional. I have also worked extensively with corporate writers, working on text for use in marketing, employee education, and websites. I welcome all inquiries. Let me know how I can help perfect your writing!

FAQ 4: Where Do Your Rates Come From?

Hello all!

It’s time for another in my frequently asked questions series. Since it deals with money, today’s topic tends to get people particularly curious: How do I determine my rates? Well, the short answer is that I multiply my hourly rate for the desired service by the number of work hours required to complete the project. But where do I get that hourly rate and that number of hours?

When I was describing the editing process last week, I mentioned that I do a sample edit to help me develop an estimate for any project. That is the origin of the number of hours. I take the total number of words in the project and divide that by the number of words in the sample edit, then multiply that result by the amount of time it took me to do the sample. That gives me a fairly accurate estimate of the number of hours a project will take me. For those of you who (like me!) aren’t exactly math-brained people, here’s an example to help illustrate the point:

  • Say I receive a sample edit of 500 words. The total number of words in the project is 25,000. It takes me 30 minutes to complete the sample edit.
  • First, I divide 25,000 words by 500 words, which gives me 50 (25000 / 500 = 50).
  • Then, I multiply 50 by 30 minutes (0.5 hours), which gives me 25 hours (50 x 0.5 = 25). It will take me about 25 hours to complete the project.

That process gets me the number of hours. But then, of course, I need an hourly rate to charge for my work. For that, I simply use the industry standard as indicated in the Editorial Freelance Association’s list of editorial rates (found at http://the-efa.org/res/rates.php). The EFA is a national organization for editors, and they offer many marvelous resources for editors and authors alike. Their rate chart helps keep a level playing field when it comes to charging for editing in the United States. So, to continue with the example:

  • The author for the project wants a medium copyedit, for which the EFA suggests charging $40 per hour.
  • I multiply 25 hours by a $40 hourly rate, which gives me $1,000 (25 x 40 = 1000). My estimate for this project is $1,000.

And that is where my rates come from! Next time, I’ll be talking about the different types of materials I edit. I hope to see you then!

FAQ 3: How Does the Editing Process Work?

Hello everyone!

I’m back with another frequently asked question and its answer. Today’s topic is how the editing process works; that is, how is it that things move from an author’s inquiry to a completed editing project? While I can’t claim to be speaking for all editors when I answer this one–since every editor has his or her own process and techniques–I do believe that a description of my editing process will at least give a general idea for how it works for most editors out there. So, off we go!

The process begins when I receive an inquiry from an author interested in hiring me. Generally, my first step is to obtain information about the work to be edited (its genre, length, etc.), the due date for the project, the type of editing sought, and (if applicable) whether it will be self-published or marketed to publishing companies. Finally, I request a two- or three-page sample of the work.

My next step is to use that sample to both get a feel for the author’s writing and complete a sample edit for the author. Completing the sample edit assists me in determining the estimated price of the editing project, and I am then able to send both the sample edit and the estimate back to the author for review. Once the author has reviewed everything and asked any questions he or she might have, I draw up a contract for the project for the author and I to sign. In addition to stating the cost of the project, the contract’s primary purpose is to protect the author’s rights to his or her work, explicitly stating that the author retains sole copyright to the work being edited and that any changes I make or language I write falls under that author’s copyright.

Once all those preliminary steps are complete, the author sends me the manuscript and the actual editing work begins. My process might vary slightly depending on the genre of the work or the timeline for the project, but generally, I do two or three runs through anything I edit. The first run tends to be where I catch most of the things I correct, with the second and third runs in place for me to correct anything I missed in the first run. I also read the work aloud on the second and third runs; reading aloud allows me to catch things that my eye alone would miss. I primarily use Microsoft Word for my editing because its Track Changes feature is hard to beat in terms of allowing the author to see and accept or reject each and every change I make to a document, but sometimes I also work in Adobe Acrobat or InDesign. I also frequently refer to the style guide and dictionary being followed for the work to check myself on anything from spellings to citations.

Once I’ve completed the editing, I send the work (with all my changes tracked) back to the author for his or her review. Usually, the author will then make further changes based on my suggestions and will send the work back to me again for another quick edit. That is also when I answer any questions the author might have about my changes, and we might discuss how best to handle any particularly tricky or sensitive sections of text. Finally, when the author is completely happy with my editing and the shape the work is in, we call the project complete.

And that is how the editing process works! I hope my description helps shed some light on how editors do their work. Next time, I’ll be discussing that most controversial topic: rates. See you then!

FAQ 2: What Exactly Does an Editor Do, Anyway?

Hello everyone!

Today, I’m answering another one of those questions I’m asked most often: “What exactly does an editor do, anyway?” The short answer (borrowed from one of my wonderful copyediting certificate program professors) is that it is the job of editors to infuse any written work with consistency, clarity, and elegance. We make sure that everything within a manuscript is consistent, from usage of commas, to spellings, to characters’ descriptions, to major themes. We make sure that the content is clear for readers, smoothing out any sections where the wording has the potential to lead to misunderstandings. And finally, we make sure that the language is elegant, that it both looks and sounds as pleasing as possible without altering the author’s voice or purpose in the writing.

That’s the answer in a nutshell, but the actual process of bringing those three elements to a manuscript is a bit more complicated and varies depending on the type of work an editor is hired to do. Every type of editing, however, involves at least two (and often more) very careful and detailed readings of a written work. It’s not like reading a book for pleasure, though it can indeed be quite an enjoyable process; it’s not even just checking to make sure things are spelled or punctuated according to the “rules,” though that is part of it. It is a meticulous consideration of every word and every punctuation mark to ensure that they are the words and marks best suited to convey the author’s meaning consistently, clearly, and elegantly. When the task is done right, an editor will be able to justify each and every element of the text, whether a suggested alteration or the author’s original work left as is.

And that is what an editor does! Hopefully that helps solve some of the mystery in an admittedly nebulous profession. Up next time, I’ll discuss what the editing process involves. Until then!

FAQ 1: How Did You Become an Editor?

Hello all my fellow literary lovers!

This is the first in a series of blogs that answers the questions I’m asked most often, and the first question I’ll address is “How did you become an editor?” I get this question a lot because, I’m guessing, editor is something of an unusual career. It’s not something that most kids grow up wanting to be someday, and even many adults are not sure exactly what an editor does. And since many editors work for themselves, it’s not a career one just falls into. So, how did I become an editor?

It started with my deep and abiding love of books. As far back as I can remember, I loved to read. I spent hours in my local public and school libraries, and it was no surprise to anyone when I decided in sixth grade that I wanted to be a librarian when I grew up. I chased that dream through much of the rest of my education, earning my undergraduate degree in English, two teaching credentials (so that I could be a school librarian), and a Master of Library and Information Science degree. My dream came true when I was hired as the librarian for a San Diego high school, and I had a wonderful time sharing my love of books and reading with the students and staff there. The downside, though, to working in a public school system is that staffing is determined largely based on seniority, and as the rookie librarian in the district, I ultimately lost my position to somebody with more seniority when budget cuts forced many of the district’s librarians out of their jobs.

That left me with a choice. I could work as a substitute librarian and hope to someday be hired back as a school’s permanent librarian. I could seek employment in one of San Diego’s public libraries. Or, I could go to work on the other end of the literary spectrum, helping people prepare books for publication instead of recommending them to people once they were published. I had worked as an editor for various companies on a part-time basis since college, not to mention the countless papers and essays I’d edited for my undergraduate classmates, family members, and students along the way. I’d also gone back to school while working as a librarian to earn my copyediting certificate, just in case I ever wanted to do more editing.

After many long conversations with my husband, I had my answer: I was going to see if I could make it as a full-time editor. I was fortunate to still have those companies around, happy to hire me for editing services once more, and I was able to build my client base from there. I also realized that I loved being an editor as much as I’d loved being a librarian; without expecting it, I had transitioned from one dream career into another.

And that, in short–well, really, in long–is how I became an editor. Stay tuned for next time, when I’ll talk about that mystery of what exactly it is an editor does. See you then!

Classes and Blogs

Hello everyone!

This past week, I had the distinct pleasure of recording two interviews with fabulous author and teacher Kitty Bucholtz. Kitty is currently gearing up to teach a series of online classes about self-publishing, and she asked me if I’d lend a little insight into the editing portion of the process…which, of course, I was more than happy to do! The experience got me thinking two things: first, that I should let you all know about Kitty’s classes, which will be an excellent resource for any of you considering going the self-publication route, and second, that perhaps I should do a blog series answering some of those editing FAQs about which many of you may be wondering. So, with that in mind…

If you are looking to self-publish but aren’t quite sure where to begin, look no further! Kitty’s got a class for you starting as early as this June that will guide you through each and every step of the process and lead you to self-publication success (not to mention that you’ll get to see her interviews with me!). Visit her at http://writerentrepreneurguides.com/classes/ to read more about her classes and to sign up.

And…

Have you heard that you should hire an editor but aren’t quite sure how that will help you? Are you wondering what exactly an editor does or how the editing process works? Never fear! My next few blogs will answer those questions I’m most frequently asked by friends and clients alike, including:

  • How did you become an editor?
  • What exactly does an editor do, anyway?
  • How does the editing process work?
  • Where do your rates come from?
  • What types of materials do you edit?
  • Why do I need an editor?

If you have a question not on this list that you’d like answered, please don’t hesitate to let me know! My goal is to take some of the mystery out of the editing process so that you can reap all the benefits of having an editor and end up with a manuscript that’s the best it can possibly be. Watch for the answer to the first question in the next week. In the meantime, happy reading and writing!

Free Book Alert

Happy Tuesday, all!

For those of you not already aware of her and her work, Kitty Bucholtz (http://kittybucholtz.com/) is a fabulous chick lit writer, and I was delighted to discover that one of her books, Little Miss Lovesick, is free on Kindle today through Saturday! This sweet romance is set in Traverse City, Michigan, and features a heroine torn between Mr. Wrong and Mr. Right…with the very vocal voices in her head adding commentary every step of the way! This is a great read for a lazy day on the beach, and with summer right around the corner, what better time to grab a free copy? The e-book is available on Amazon’s website, at http://www.amazon.com/Little-Miss-Lovesick-Kitty-Bucholtz-ebook/dp/B005NVFJ70/. Enjoy!

GUMPTION Release!

Hello everyone!

I am delighted to announce the upcoming release of an outstanding new book that I think is best described as a “business thriller.” Written by restaurant company CEO and businessman extraordinaire Scott Barnett, GUMPTION: Taking Bubba Gump from Movie to Restaurant tells the story of the creation, development, and rise to success of the Bubba Gump Shrimp Company restaurant chain from the unique, insightful, and wryly humorous perspective of its founding CEO. Much more than just a business or brand-building how-to book, GUMPTION is a fascinating behind-the-scenes look at both restaurants and Hollywood, as well as just being a truly interesting story.

The book will be available in hardcover and e-book formats on May 15, 2015, with a national book signing tour to follow. San Diego’s stop will be on Thursday, May 21, at 7:30pm, at Warwick’s in La Jolla (http://www.warwicks.com/event/scott-barnett-gumption). For more information about the author or the book, please visit the official GUMPTION website at http://www.scottbarnettassociates.com/.

I’ll be at the book signing to get my copy, and I hope you’ll join me…this is one must-read you don’t want to miss!

The Serial Comma

Yes, it’s true. I’m a huge fan of the serial comma. Guilty as charged.

It’s remarkable to me the power that that tiny little piece of punctuation–also called the “Oxford” or “Harvard” comma–carries. Not only does it have the ability to provide immense clarity, it’s also managed to make itself one of the most highly debated points of English grammar. People tend to either love it or hate it, and most are willing to argue the correctness of their opinion until they are blue in the face. I am one of those people. And now I’m going to present my case in favor of the serial comma.

Take these two sentences, potentially written by an author in her Acknowledgments, as an example: “I’d like to thank my fans, my mother and my husband” and “I’d like to thank my fans, my mother, and my husband.” In the first sentence (the one without the serial comma), the author’s only fans are her mother and her husband. Even if that were true, it’s highly unlikely that any author out there would want to advertise that fact. By contrast, the second sentence (the one with the serial comma) makes it clear that the author is thanking three distinct entities. In this case, as in many others, the serial comma makes a huge difference in meaning.

“But wait!” you might say, “Even if such a sentence were to appear in print, wouldn’t the reader’s common sense dictate the true meaning regardless of whether the serial comma was there?” And you would have a point. But I contend that “just because most readers will probably understand the meaning anyway” is not a valid reason to risk confusing readers. Why leave open the potential for misunderstanding when it can be fixed with a simple comma? After all, sometimes readers might think it’s more fun to interpret things the wrong way: http://i.imgur.com/IBBd2F2.png and http://i.imgur.com/OTJQAeh.jpg.

The truth, though, is that for every style guide or language expert who says using the serial comma is the thing to do, there’s another style guide or language expert out there who will argue the opposite. There is no definite right answer; it really is just a matter of opinion. But I’m hoping that I’ve made some progress in convincing you to use the serial comma in your writing. And who knows? Maybe someday we’ll all agree that using the serial comma is, in fact, the “write” thing to do.

Biographer’s Day

This is one for the biographers, both current and aspiring…

Today, May 16, is Biographer’s Day. Why May 16? Because that is the anniversary of the day biographer James Boswell met for the first time with author Samuel Johnson to begin composing what is widely considered to be the greatest biography ever written. In fact, it wasn’t until Boswell published his Life of Samuel Johnson in 1791 that the modern biographical genre even came into existence. Prior to Boswell’s 1763 meeting with Johnson in a London bookshop, biographical conventions were quite different, and biographies held little of the popularity they have today. Boswell’s work, with its extensive detail and almost conversational style, served as a major stepping stone in developing modern biographical conventions.

So now, the language world sets aside May 16 to celebrate both James Boswell and all the biographers who have come since. Today is a wonderful day to start reading a biography (perhaps Life of Samuel Johnson?) or, better yet, to start writing one. And if you have a biography, autobiography, or memoir in need of editing, let me know today and I’ll edit the first chapter free!

Happy Biographer’s Day!

Get Caught Reading Month

Hello fellow lovers of language!

Today begins the month of May, which is, incidentally, Get Caught Reading Month. Now, I know the Get Caught Reading program was designed to encourage K-12 students to read, but I contend that everyone, regardless of age, should make a point to read as much as possible. I admit that my position on this issue is somewhat biased. As a former librarian and current editor, books have long been a central part of my life. Libraries and bookstores are my happy places. Reading has always been my favorite hobby. I carry my Kindle with me everywhere I go. And yet it’s still so easy to get distracted with other activities and not read as much as I would like to, and probably not as much as I should.

Now, if you’re anything like me, you’ve got a list a mile long of books you’d like to read someday when you’ve got the time. Even being as blessed as I am to read as part of my job, I still cannot find enough hours to explore all the literary worlds I’d like to. There are classics I have still not read, ones I’m ashamed to admit I’ve made it this far in life without experiencing (Great Expectations and The Catcher in the Rye come to mind). I have yet to crack open John Green’s The Fault in Our Stars or Helen Oyeyemi’s Boy, Snow, Bird or any other great new book this year (except for those I’ve edited, of course). And every time I choose something else over reading, I’m cheating myself.

Because books teach us how to be human. Or, at least, the ones worth reading do. A book doesn’t have to be great literature to help us learn something about ourselves and our humanity; it just has to communicate its message to its reader. Books serve as our practice for the real world. They model examples of human interaction and show us how different approaches to all manner of scenarios can play out. They inform and even create our shared experience as people living on this planet. Why do we need to read books? Because they give meaning to everything else we do and make us better people in the process.

And if that’s not enough to convince you of the value of reading, here’s a little secret for all you writers out there: Reading is the single best way to become a better writer. Today’s best authors are the ones who have read extensively themselves. The writers of those classics we still read today, hundreds of years after their initial publication, read the works of authors who came before them. Pick up almost any good book and you’ll find at least one allusion to another good book. Perhaps those great authors are onto something. Perhaps we should all read to inspire ourselves, to be better at whatever it is we’re doing.

I hope you’ll join me this month in recommitting yourself to getting caught reading. I promise you won’t be sorry!